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Zaonia's Cronicles pg 4 by Sharaiza Zaonia's Cronicles pg 4 by Sharaiza
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IF THERE ARE SOME GRAMMAR MISTAKES PLEASE TELL ME. THANK YOU.


Yeahh!!! I like this page :D
More detailed than the previous pages.
I want to keep this style for the comic.
the one who talk "remembering" is still Tarek.

Characters featured
Lasha
Kijivu (the grey male)
Hari (the brownish female)
Wazi


INFO- If you don't know wath zaonis are look at these: [link] [link] and [link] or check out my gallery folder called ZAON PACK. :)


You may NOT copy, sell, heavily reference, trace, steal, put this artwork on your website/blog/dAaccount or use it in any other way without my written permission!

Thankyou



Zaonia, Zaonis©*Sharaiza


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:iconrunningfreely:
runningfreely Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2012  Hobbyist
Bellissima questa pagina, la mia preferita :heart:
Adoro i disegni e la composizione :)
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Sharaiza Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Grazie mille ^^
č anche la mia preferita :heart:
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:iconrunningfreely:
runningfreely Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2012  Hobbyist
Prego :)
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shadowraiwolf09 Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2012  Student General Artist
*bark**bark*more more
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Artiifex Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Very good job, I will definitely be following this comic. I can't tell the plot yet, but its going in a good direction! You got yourself a watcher :)
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Sharaiza Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much! :heart:
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:iconaquene-lupetta:
Aquene-lupetta Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
amo questa pagina! :heart:
Continua così! :clap: ;)
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Sharaiza Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Grazie mille! :hug:
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:iconaquene-lupetta:
Aquene-lupetta Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Di nulla! :huggle: Non vedo l'ora di vedere le prossime! ;)
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Lew-LapinGris Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Mi piace come ti č venuta questa pagina ;)
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Sharaiza Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Grazie :D questa č anche la mia preferita sino ad ora.
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EpicLunar Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2012
Cant wait for more pages! :D
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Destynee33 Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Wonderful page! The composition and balance is great.

As for grammar mistakes:
Perhaps just "It was time that taught us how life can be hard" sounds better. "Time" is not a person, so calling it 'who' is a bit unwieldy. Also, you don't need to give a determinant 'the'.

Also, not quite sure what you mean by: "so 'as the pack." ...?

Hope that was helpful XD Great page! Can't wait to see how this evolves.
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Sharaiza Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! :hug:
Yeah...In italian it's quite different so I often make mistakes of this kind ^^*
and by "so 'as the pack" I meant that also the pack has its rules ...My bad I knew it was wrong but I still couldn't figure out how to write it correctly...I just pasted what google translator translated...
Again thank you for helping me. :heart:
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Destynee33 Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Haha, no problem! I love to help anyone who's mother-tongue isn't English.

Okay, then how about: "Zaonia has its rules, and so does the pack." or "Zaonia as its rules, as does the pack." (If you want to keep the 'as') Adding that comma after 'rules' would also help.

Hope that helps XD
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Sharaiza Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks really :)
and yes it helped a lot. :heart:
I am editing it right now.
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Destynee33 Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Alright, I'm glad to be a help! I saw you edited it; looks great :D
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